Main production draft



Focus group feedback:
  • The 'fun' and 'colourful' aesthetic was positively received.
  • The middle 8 part - some colours need to be less saturated.
  • At 1:42 one clip overlays the shot its transitioning to for a small amount of time. It could look smoother if this was changed.
  • The clip at 3:03: change the video boundary to the centre of the page so it looks more intentional and also matches the symmetry of the following shot.




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